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  1. 05-18-2003, 02:52 PM #1
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    Cool Dedicated To My First Born Child

    YOU WERE THERE

    you were there in the wind, I heard it whisper your name,
    you were there, in the rain, I felt your tears drop down upon my face,
    you were there in the snow, the flakes falling from your soul into mine,
    you were there, on sunny days I saw your eyes in the bright rays,
    you were there, espying me from behind our sister moon,

    I looked for you in the wind, I heard it whisper your name,
    I looked for you in the rain, I felt you cry upon my face,
    I counted the flakes of snow and knew that somewhere out there you were counting
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    I looked into my ice-cream on sunny days and saw you melt into my heart
    and in the full light of the moon,your reflection could be clearly seen
    my darling lost son I looked for you everywhere and now I have found you
    I can rest again and love you the way that I should have been allowed to

    Anna brown march 6th 2002
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  2. 05-18-2003, 04:06 PM #2
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    Beautiful!!
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  3. 05-18-2003, 04:32 PM #3
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    Originally posted by calico
    Beautiful!!
    I couldn't have said it any better.
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  4. 05-18-2003, 05:00 PM #4
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    Thank you, very beautiful!
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  5. 05-18-2003, 05:45 PM #5
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    Thank you for sharing that, it is beautiful.
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  6. 05-18-2003, 06:38 PM #6
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    Beautiful
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  7. 05-18-2003, 10:43 PM #7
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    That was beautiful!
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    Very beautiful!
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    That was so touching ! Very beautiful !
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  10. 05-19-2003, 03:38 AM #10
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    thank you for all your kind posts I am so glad you liked my poem.


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  11. 05-19-2003, 10:32 AM #11
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    That is a very beautiful and touching poem. Thank you for sharing it with us!
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  12. 05-19-2003, 03:27 PM #12
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    Tears smarted my eyes to read such a stirring, soul-wrenching story. I, too, have felt this loss, but know not if my babe were son or daughter.

    So well written and so tragic.
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  13. 05-20-2003, 03:51 AM #13
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    Oh graci I am so sorry to hear that are you a birthmother also?


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  14. 05-21-2003, 06:48 AM #14
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    I felt that this poem was about a miscarriage. Your words carried a different meaning for me. That is the wonder of poetry...we each come away with something different.

    Though I don't share your experience, I share the pain of loss and hope to be reunited after death.
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    oh graci I am sorry to hear you had a misscarriage


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