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YOU WERE THERE

you were there in the wind, I heard it whisper your name,
you were there, in the rain, I felt your tears drop down upon my face,
you were there in the snow, the flakes falling from your soul into mine,
you were there, on sunny days I saw your eyes in the bright rays,
you were there, espying me from behind our sister moon,

I looked for you in the wind, I heard it whisper your name,
I looked for you in the rain, I felt you cry upon my face,
I counted the flakes of snow and knew that somewhere out there you were counting
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I looked into my ice-cream on sunny days and saw you melt into my heart
and in the full light of the moon,your reflection could be clearly seen
my darling lost son I looked for you everywhere and now I have found you
I can rest again and love you the way that I should have been allowed to

Anna brown march 6th 2002
 

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Thank you, very beautiful!
 

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Beautiful :angel:
 

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Very beautiful! :angel:
 

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That was so touching ! Very beautiful !
 

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That is a very beautiful and touching poem. Thank you for sharing it with us!
 

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Tears smarted my eyes to read such a stirring, soul-wrenching story. I, too, have felt this loss, but know not if my babe were son or daughter.

So well written and so tragic.
 

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I felt that this poem was about a miscarriage. Your words carried a different meaning for me. That is the wonder of poetry...we each come away with something different.

Though I don't share your experience, I share the pain of loss and hope to be reunited after death.
 
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