[marshwriggle]

YOU WERE THERE

you were there in the wind, I heard it whisper your name,
you were there, in the rain, I felt your tears drop down upon my face,
you were there in the snow, the flakes falling from your soul into mine,
you were there, on sunny days I saw your eyes in the bright rays,
you were there, espying me from behind our sister moon,

I looked for you in the wind, I heard it whisper your name,
I looked for you in the rain, I felt you cry upon my face,
I counted the flakes of snow and knew that somewhere out there you were counting
also
I looked into my ice-cream on sunny days and saw you melt into my heart
and in the full light of the moon,your reflection could be clearly seen
my darling lost son I looked for you everywhere and now I have found you
I can rest again and love you the way that I should have been allowed to

Anna brown march 6th 2002

 

[Heather]

Beautiful!!:angel2:

 

[heavensent_7]

Beautiful!!:angel2:

I couldn't have said it any better.

 

[mrscornbread]

Thank you, very beautiful!

 

[homesteadmamma]

Thank you for sharing that, it is beautiful.

 

[Michelle]

Beautiful :angel:

 

[MANDERS]

That was beautiful!

 

[justjenn]

Very beautiful! :angel:

 

[captclearance]

That was so touching ! Very beautiful !

 

[marshwriggle]

thank you for all your kind posts I am so glad you liked my poem.


marshwriggle

http://homepage.ntlworld.com/dreamwarden/anna/index.htm
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[Katybird]

That is a very beautiful and touching poem. Thank you for sharing it with us!

 

[graci42]

Tears smarted my eyes to read such a stirring, soul-wrenching story. I, too, have felt this loss, but know not if my babe were son or daughter.

So well written and so tragic.

 

[marshwriggle]

Oh graci I am so sorry to hear that are you a birthmother also?


marshwriggle:angel:

 

[graci42]

I felt that this poem was about a miscarriage. Your words carried a different meaning for me. That is the wonder of poetry...we each come away with something different.

Though I don't share your experience, I share the pain of loss and hope to be reunited after death.

 

[marshwriggle]

oh graci I am sorry to hear you had a misscarriage


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