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Here's a good site where you can find writing tips for beginners. Helping Writers Become Authors

You have described a room and your character's physical description but not told me anything about your character, her personality, her goals, or what she feels. It is not engaging to the reader. There is no activity and no emotion present.

How does Sara feel about the rain? Is it a light spring rain, or a dismal winter rain? Is it making noise on the roof or windows? What mood are you setting? What does the humidity mean? Does she like her job? Is her position important to her? Does she want to be in the office today? Are there any other employees and how does she interact with them? What color is her top, does she like bright bold colors or does she wear neutral, subdued clothing? Is she happily single? Why are her friends setting her up with a date? Which friends? Why is she going along with it? What does she hope to gain by doing this? Does she like Thai food? Has she ever had Thai food (maybe this is a new experience for her). Would she rather be doing something else tonight? Why?

The physical description is good for you to have but the reader does not need the fine details like her height or the length of her ponytail or the width of her thighs. It's sufficient to say that Sara is short or stocky, or has pulled her shoulder length hair back out of her face while she works. Let the reader imagine her with only a few descriptors. "Info-bombing" the reader with a lot of details is not interesting or engaging. At the same time, you have very few descriptors about the environment she is in. Is the library warm or cold? You mention the humidity, how is it affecting her? What sounds and smells are present. What do they mean for your character?

Finally, your character isn't doing anything. I know this is a short introductory piece but it should show Sara in action to grab the reader's interest. For example, she might be hurrying out of the office to avoid the co-worker who set her up, or to avoid her boss dumping last minute work on her. She could be walking in the rain trying to keep from getting too wet from passing cars, or desperately trying to hail a taxi so she won't be a disheveled mess for her date. Give us a scene that shows how Sara reacts to her environment and others around her.

I know that seems like a lot, but you'd be surprised how a few carefully chosen adjectives and action verbs can change a piece of writing.
 
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